Hi phoebe I love your post I love how you told me all the things about Hamilton next time could you please make it brighter because I can't see it very well
Hi Phoebe, my name is Lucy. I am from your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class. It is really nice to see where you are from. You will need to take your last sentence out. You have done a great job on your writing. Can you please make your writing just a little bit bigger?
Hi. My name is Tuva-Lisa and I am from your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class. Wow your from Hamilton! I like how you described every thing you like about it but next time you can make your text bigger so people can see it better. What is your favourite place in Hamilton and what is it named?
Hi phoebe I love your post I love how you told me all the things about Hamilton next time could you please make it brighter because I can't see it very well
ReplyDeleteThank you for giving me feedback next time i will make it brighter.
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hi phoebes i reeally like your blog post
ReplyDeleteHi Phoebe, my name is Lucy. I am from your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class. It is really nice to see where you are from. You will need to take your last sentence out. You have done a great job on your writing. Can you please make your writing just a little bit bigger?
ReplyDeleteHi. My name is Tuva-Lisa and I am from your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class. Wow your from Hamilton! I like how you described every thing you like about it but next time you can make your text bigger so people can see it better. What is your favourite place in Hamilton and what is it named?
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